I'm giving you one star instead of zero, because you let the tab key help people through the game. Randomly click places until you hit some obscure pixel games are not fun. Non-sensical quizes that you have to brute force your way through on some questions are not fun. Move your pointer through the maze games, can be fun, but are easy to cheat though by right clicking. The idea for a good game is for it to be challenging, not impossible. Go check out some higher ranked similar games on the portal, so you can get an idea on how to improve.
It's okay. You had a simple plot, basic animation, and avoided being just spastic and stupid (which is a problem with alot of first submissions do). To make it better, add a loading screen, sound effects, backgrounds, some more animation, etc. Overall, just try to make it more complete. I don't think its portal qualitiy yet, but you don't have far to go.
(Also, it seemed like he magically had a bandana appear around his waist.)
The animation is alright, but you've just thrown together a bunch of random songclips, most of which had nothing to do with their animations. If you just make the video and background music flow together better, you could have a really enjoyable flash.
While I think your review is helpful, I can't help but wonder if you've given some ripped sprite animations a higher rating just for having a decent story. (Actually, while we're on the subject, most have awful stories.)
This game seems pretty fun, but after going through a few waves, it started to freeze up and I got the above message. This seems like it could be a decent game once the bugs are worked out. Also, you might want to add in a noise or some indicator to let the player know they don't have enough energy to build a new turret. Overall, it has lots of potential.
Tone down the audio, add in some better backgrounds, and make it a tad less spastic (crazy can be funny, but too crazy and it's just annoying). You do have some decent animation in there, so you could pull off something neat.
BobThePen
All 6 flash Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars September 9, 2010
I still love this.
Even now this has to be my favorite flash video on all of newgrounds.
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars May 18, 2008
Just hit tab.
I'm giving you one star instead of zero, because you let the tab key help people through the game. Randomly click places until you hit some obscure pixel games are not fun. Non-sensical quizes that you have to brute force your way through on some questions are not fun. Move your pointer through the maze games, can be fun, but are easy to cheat though by right clicking. The idea for a good game is for it to be challenging, not impossible. Go check out some higher ranked similar games on the portal, so you can get an idea on how to improve.
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars May 18, 2008
Not terrible.
It's okay. You had a simple plot, basic animation, and avoided being just spastic and stupid (which is a problem with alot of first submissions do). To make it better, add a loading screen, sound effects, backgrounds, some more animation, etc. Overall, just try to make it more complete. I don't think its portal qualitiy yet, but you don't have far to go.
(Also, it seemed like he magically had a bandana appear around his waist.)
yeah he did.I changed my style day2
Rated 2 / 5 stars May 18, 2008
Decent animation, no real point
The animation is alright, but you've just thrown together a bunch of random songclips, most of which had nothing to do with their animations. If you just make the video and background music flow together better, you could have a really enjoyable flash.
While I think your review is helpful, I can't help but wonder if you've given some ripped sprite animations a higher rating just for having a decent story. (Actually, while we're on the subject, most have awful stories.)
Rated 1.5 / 5 stars May 16, 2008
Would you like to abort this script?
This game seems pretty fun, but after going through a few waves, it started to freeze up and I got the above message. This seems like it could be a decent game once the bugs are worked out. Also, you might want to add in a noise or some indicator to let the player know they don't have enough energy to build a new turret. Overall, it has lots of potential.
Rated 1.5 / 5 stars May 15, 2008
If you try again...
Tone down the audio, add in some better backgrounds, and make it a tad less spastic (crazy can be funny, but too crazy and it's just annoying). You do have some decent animation in there, so you could pull off something neat.